“the wild clover days are not gone…”

wild clover days

 

The wild clover days
are not gone
honey still flows
tupelo sweet and bees,
oh the bees,
their stings, libertine,
yet so welcome
so raw
and the wild clover days
are still mine.

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4 thoughts on ““the wild clover days are not gone…”

  1. Dear Lady, I loved the first stanza, but the second for me lost its way until the last two lines. May I suggest losing the first 6 lines of stanza 2 and melding the lines together? I hope you will not take offence at my critique x

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